{"id":881,"date":"2013-03-21T23:35:16","date_gmt":"2013-03-21T23:35:16","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=881"},"modified":"2019-11-26T20:09:17","modified_gmt":"2019-11-26T20:09:17","slug":"17-principii-de-aur-care-te-ajuta-pe-tine-sa-scrii-bine","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=881","title":{"rendered":"17 principii de aur care te ajut\u0103 pe tine s\u0103 scrii bine"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/17-principii-de-aur-care-te-ajuta-pe-tine-sa-scrii-bine\/writing\/\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-882\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-882\" alt=\"writing\" src=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/03\/writing.jpg\" width=\"227\" height=\"222\" \/><\/a><strong>Azi vorbim despre 17 principii care \u00ee\u0163i vor fi utile atunci c\u00e2nd vrei s\u0103 scrii ceva. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Din r\u0103spunsurile primite, una dintre cauzele pentru care oamenilor le este fric\u0103 s\u0103 scrie este c\u0103 nu au ordine \u00een idei.<\/p>\n<p>\u015etii momentul \u00een care e\u015fti cople\u015fit de idei, scrii un cuv\u00e2nt, apoi \u00eel \u015ftergi, mai scrii unul \u015fi tot a\u015fa?<\/p>\n<p>E un cerc vicios. Ai r\u0103bdare cinci minute, te enervezi c\u0103 nu \u015ftii ce s\u0103 scrii \u015fi la\u015fi totul balt\u0103. Am \u00eent\u00e2lnit de foarte multe ori aceast\u0103 scuz\u0103, a\u015fa c\u0103 am \u00eenceput s\u0103 pun pe-o foaie c\u00e2teva lucruri utile \u00een acest sens.<\/p>\n<p>Asta se \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103 la nivel mental.<\/p>\n<p>La nivelul sufletului, lucrurile se schimb\u0103. Dorin\u0163a r\u0103m\u00e2ne acolo \u015fi te macin\u0103, dar, pentru c\u0103 nu ai claritate \u015fi o structur\u0103 bine definit\u0103, am\u00e2ni momentul.<\/p>\n<p><strong>A\u015fadar, claritatea este foarte important\u0103.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Iar creativitatea este un proces care se \u00eembun\u0103t\u0103\u0163e\u015fte continuu, cu exerci\u0163iu.<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201eCum s\u0103 scriu un text care s\u0103 le plac\u0103 celorlal\u0163i?\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>\u201eCe cuvinte s\u0103 folosesc?\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>\u201eCum s\u0103 transmit mesajul c\u00e2t mai bine?\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>\u201eCum s\u0103 scap de dezordinea din mintea mea \u00een privin\u0163a ideilor?\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Astfel de \u00eentreb\u0103ri am primit de la voi. A\u015fa c\u0103 am \u00eenceput cercetarea. \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n<p><strong>Eu am g\u0103sit 17 principii pe care le aplic \u015fi eu deseori \u015fi care o s\u0103-\u0163i fie de folos.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>1. Folose\u015fte propozi\u0163ii scurte.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>2. Folose\u015fte verbe de ac\u0163iune. Propor\u0163ia ar trebui s\u0103 fie cam a\u015fa: 4 la 1.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Dac\u0103 ai o descriere, de exemplu, <strong>scrii patru propozi\u0163ii descriptive, apoi introduci o mic\u0103 scen\u0103 de mi\u015fcare<\/strong>. Orice, dar s\u0103 se \u00eent\u00e2mple ceva.<\/p>\n<p><strong>3. Scrie pentru a exprima, nu pentru a impresiona.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Uneori, se \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103 s\u0103 fim altcineva, folosind cuvinte ne\u00een\u0163elese. \u00ce\u0163i pierzi cititorii \u00een acest fel, pentru c\u0103 ace\u015ftia nu \u00een\u0163eleg \u015fi nu au timp s\u0103 caute alte surse care s\u0103 le traduc\u0103 ce vrei tu s\u0103 transmi\u0163i.<\/p>\n<p><strong>4. Creeaz\u0103 conflict. Dac\u0103 acesta nu este prezent, nu exist\u0103 povestea.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>5. Arat\u0103, nu spune. \ud83d\ude42<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em>\u201eDac\u0103 scriitorul nu are lacrimi \u00een ochi, nici cititorul n-o s\u0103 aib\u0103. Dac\u0103 scriitorul nu este impresionat, nici cititorul nu va fi.\u201d (Robert Frost)<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Cititorul are nevoie de detalii pentru a vizualiza cuvintele pe care le scrii. Are nevoie s\u0103 miroas\u0103 parfumul eroinei, s\u0103 simt\u0103 gustul vinului pe care \u00eel bea, s\u0103 simt\u0103 mirosul ploii de var\u0103 despre care scrii tu.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Nu povesti despre aceste lucruri, ci folose\u015fte multe detalii. Folose\u015fte toate sim\u0163urile.<\/strong> Dac\u0103 descrii un loc, provoac\u0103-\u0163i cititorul s\u0103-\u015fi imagineze ce sunete se aud, ce temperatura este afar\u0103, ce tr\u0103iri \u00eel \u00eencearc\u0103 pe personaj etc.<\/p>\n<p>\u00cenchipuie-\u0163i c\u0103 scrisul e ca un aparat de filmat. \u00centr-un film, actorul nu apare pe ecran \u015fi explic\u0103 privitorului c\u0103 este furios, ci \u00ee\u015fi arat\u0103 starea prin gesturi, cuvinte, ac\u0163iuni, atitudini.<\/p>\n<p><strong>6. Prefer\u0103 simplitatea \u00een locul complexit\u0103\u0163ii.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Cuvintele lungi \u00eenlocuie\u015fte-le cu sinonime care s\u0103 fie mai scurte.<\/p>\n<p><strong>7. Elimin\u0103 cuvintele \u00een plus. <\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><em>Recunosc, sunt un om curajos, cutez\u0103tor.<\/em> (Curajos \u015fi cutez\u0103tor sunt sinonime. Alege unul dintre ele.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>8. Empatizeaz\u0103 cu cititorul. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Pentru a fi citit, \u00een\u0163eles \u015fi acceptat, este bine s\u0103 ai o \u00een\u0163elegere clar\u0103 a scopurilor tale \u015fi a cititorilor. Dac\u0103 acestea difer\u0103, ai dou\u0103 modalit\u0103\u0163i de a-\u0163i face acceptat mesajul. Sau schimbi scopul cititorului, sau \u00eei transmi\u0163i c\u0103, de\u015fi inten\u0163iile voastre difer\u0103, au multe \u00een comun.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Nu e suficient s\u0103 scrii ca s\u0103 fii \u00een\u0163eles. Trebuie s\u0103 scrii, astfel \u00eenc\u00e2t s\u0103 nu fii prost-\u00een\u0163eles.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>9. Variaz\u0103.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>Stilul de a scrie se va defini pe m\u0103sur\u0103 ce tu \u00ee\u0163i vei defini personalitatea.<\/strong> Scriitorii buni prefer\u0103 simplitatea. Dar ei introduc suficient\u0103 varietate \u00een lungimea propozi\u0163iilor, structur\u0103, vocabular, astfel \u00eenc\u00e2t simplitatea nu e observat\u0103.<\/p>\n<p><strong>10. Folose\u015fte diateza activ\u0103, \u015fi nu diateza pasiv\u0103.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>\u00cen loc s\u0103 scrii: \u201e<em>U\u015fa a fost \u00eenchis\u0103 de c\u0103tre Mihai\u201d<\/em>, po\u0163i folosi formularea: \u201e<em>Mihai a \u00eenchis u\u015fa\u201d.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>11. Fii concret \u015fi specific, d\u00e2nd mai multe detalii.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>12. Creeaz\u0103-\u0163i opera de art\u0103 \u00een jurul unei \u00eentreb\u0103ri-cheie.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>13. Scrie, folosind mai multe substantive \u015fi verbe.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Limiteaz\u0103 num\u0103rul adjectivelor \u015fi al adverbelor.<\/p>\n<p><strong>14. Las\u0103-l pe cititor s\u0103 participe la ac\u0163iune.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>De exemplu, atunci c\u00e2nd afirmi ceva uimitor, nu-i spune c\u0103 \u201ee uimitor\u201d, ci las\u0103-l s\u0103 se minuneze singur.<\/p>\n<p><strong>15. Folose\u015fte emfaza, adic\u0103 pune cele mai puternice cuvinte \u00een cele mai importante locuri din textul t\u0103u, astfel accentu\u00e2nd o idee.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>16. Construie\u015fte-\u0163i cu grij\u0103 personajele\u00a0\u015fi ai grij\u0103 s\u0103 le implici pe toate \u00een ac\u0163iune.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Dup\u0103 cum spune Kurt Vonnegut, <em>\u201efiecare personaj trebuie s\u0103-\u015fi doreasc\u0103 ceva, chiar \u015fi numai un pahar cu ap\u0103\u201d.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>17. Revizuie\u015fte-\u0163i textul \u00eenainte s\u0103-l publici sau s\u0103-l dai cuiva s\u0103-l citeasc\u0103.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ca s\u0103 nu te r\u0103t\u0103ce\u015fti printre at\u00e2tea informa\u0163ii, \u00ee\u0163i dau \u015fi un pont.<\/p>\n<p>Ce trebuie s\u0103 faci tu <strong>PRIMA DAT\u0102<\/strong>?<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Scrie propozi\u0163ii scurte \u015fi folose\u015fte un limbaj c\u00e2t mai apropiat de cel care te cite\u015fte.<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Vreau s\u0103 aflu de la tine ce alte principii mai \u015ftii, cum te-a ajutat ceea ce am scris eu mai sus, c\u00e2nd te apuci de treab\u0103 \u015fi \u00eencepi s\u0103 pui \u00een practic\u0103 aceste reguli de aur. \ud83d\ude42<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Cu drag,<\/p>\n<p>Vio<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Azi vorbim despre 17 principii care \u00ee\u0163i vor fi utile atunci c\u00e2nd vrei s\u0103 scrii ceva. Din r\u0103spunsurile primite, una dintre cauzele pentru care oamenilor le este fric\u0103 s\u0103 scrie este c\u0103 nu au ordine \u00een idei. \u015etii momentul \u00een care e\u015fti cople\u015fit de idei, scrii un cuv\u00e2nt, apoi \u00eel \u015ftergi, mai scrii unul \u015fi [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":110,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"zakra_sidebar_layout":"customizer","zakra_remove_content_margin":false,"zakra_sidebar":"customizer","zakra_transparent_header":"customizer","zakra_logo":0,"zakra_main_header_style":"default","zakra_menu_item_color":"","zakra_menu_item_hover_color":"","zakra_menu_item_active_color":"","zakra_menu_active_style":"","zakra_page_header":true},"categories":[119],"tags":[],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v14.0.2 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/wordpress\/plugins\/seo\/ -->\n<title>17 principii de aur care te ajut\u0103 pe tine s\u0103 scrii bine - Scrie bine<\/title>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow\" \/>\n<meta name=\"googlebot\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<meta name=\"bingbot\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=881\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"ro_RO\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"17 principii de aur care te ajut\u0103 pe tine s\u0103 scrii bine - Scrie bine\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:description\" content=\"Azi vorbim despre 17 principii care \u00ee\u0163i vor fi utile atunci c\u00e2nd vrei s\u0103 scrii ceva. 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