{"id":567,"date":"2012-09-28T22:07:23","date_gmt":"2012-09-28T22:07:23","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=567"},"modified":"2019-11-27T09:22:54","modified_gmt":"2019-11-27T09:22:54","slug":"ca-si-este-solutia-prin-care-eviti-cacofonia","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=567","title":{"rendered":"\u201eca \u0219i\u201d este solu\u021bia prin care evi\u021bi cacofonia ? (+video de la Toastmasters)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/cacofonie3.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-583\" title=\"cacofonie\" alt=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/09\/cacofonie3.jpg\" width=\"240\" height=\"160\" \/><\/a>\u00ce\u021bi povesteam data trecut\u0103 de activitatea mea la <a href=\"http:\/\/toastmastersbucuresti.ro\/\" target=\"_blank\">Toastmasters<\/a>\u00a0unde sunt Grammarian.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>\u00cenainte de a trece efectiv la gre\u0219eala pe care o \u00eent\u00e2lnesc foarte des, a\u0219 vrea s\u0103 \u00eemp\u0103rt\u0103\u0219esc cu tine un g\u00e2nd pe care nu mul\u021bi \u00eel \u0219tiu, \u0219i anume ce \u00eenseamn\u0103 pentru mine Toastmasters.<\/p>\n<p>La \u00eenceput, c\u00e2nd am auzit prima dat\u0103 de acest club de vorbit \u00een public, eu fiind introvertit\u0103, am avut foarte mari reticen\u021be. Nici nu \u00eemi imaginam c\u0103 a\u0219 fi putut vreodat\u0103 s\u0103 ies \u00een fa\u021b\u0103 s\u0103 le vorbesc celorlal\u021bi. Dar un prieten, Florin, a tras de mine. Mi-a spus s\u0103 vin, s\u0103 v\u0103d doar despre ce este vorba. Nu o s\u0103 p\u0103\u021besc nimic dac\u0103 merg o dat\u0103, s\u0103 v\u0103d cum e, cum se desf\u0103\u0219oar\u0103 serile Toastmasters. \u0218i, cum eu sunt o fire curioas\u0103 \u0219i c\u0103ut\u0103toare de provoc\u0103ri, am acceptat. Am mers o dat\u0103, de dou\u0103 ori, de trei ori p\u00e2n\u0103 c\u00e2nd am prins flutura\u0219i \u00een stomac.<\/p>\n<p>Recunosc, nu \u00eemi doream foarte mult s\u0103 spun un discurs \u00een fa\u021ba celorlal\u021bi, c\u00e2t s\u0103 fiu Grammarian. <strong>Ce face un Grammarian, de fapt, la Toastmasters?<\/strong>\u00a0Are un rol. Are locul lui special, este atent la to\u021bi cei care ies \u00een fa\u021b\u0103 \u0219i spun c\u00e2teva vorbe, identific\u0103 gre\u0219elile de exprimare, le noteaz\u0103, apoi iese \u0219i el \u00een fa\u021b\u0103 \u0219i le face cunoscute celorlal\u021bi.<\/p>\n<p>Asta \u00eemi doream eu, ardeam de ner\u0103bdare s\u0103-i ajut pe ceilal\u021bi, a\u0219a c\u0103 mi-am luat inima \u00een din\u021bi \u0219i m-am \u00eenscris. <strong>La \u00eenceput<\/strong>, momentul \u00een care trebuia s\u0103 ies \u00een fa\u021b\u0103 era ca \u0219i cum a\u0219 fi zburat cu parapanta. <strong>Emo\u021bionant, plin de adrenalin\u0103, flutura\u0219ii din stomac zburau \u00een mod dezorganizat, d\u00e2ndu-mi senza\u021bia c\u0103 m\u0103 voi pierde \u0219i c\u0103 va fi un e\u0219ec.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Dar aceasta era la \u00eenceput. <strong>Pe parcurs, tot ie\u0219ind \u0219i f\u0103c\u00e2ndu-m\u0103 cunoscut\u0103 pentru afinitatea mea c\u0103tre litere, flutura\u0219ii nu au disp\u0103rut, dar au \u00eenceput s\u0103 zboare organizat. Emo\u021biile exist\u0103 (altfel a\u0219 fi un robo\u021bel), dar acum sunt mai relaxat\u0103. Acum mi se pare normal s\u0103 ies \u00een fa\u021b\u0103, s\u0103 le vorbesc celorlal\u021bi despre ce am observat eu \u00een discursurile lor \u0219i s\u0103 le explic de ce nu se spune \u201eca \u0219i\u201d.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Iat\u0103 ce a f\u0103cut pentru mine clubul Toastmasters unde acum m\u0103 simt ca acas\u0103, ca pe\u0219tele \u00een ap\u0103. M-a ajutat s\u0103 evoluez din punct de vedere profesional, emo\u021bional, personal. Acesta e \u0219i scopul, de fapt.<\/p>\n<p>Revenind la gre\u0219eala pe care eu o observ foarte des, \u201eca \u0219i\u201d, a\u0219 vrea s\u0103 \u00ee\u021bi dau o mostr\u0103 a activit\u0103\u021bii mele la Toastmasters, un fel de lec\u021bie online, live, apoi o s\u0103 revin cu explica\u021biile de rigoare.<\/p>\n<div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/f1F7qChrgj0?rel=0\" height=\"315\" width=\"420\" frameborder=\"0\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<p>Dar \u00eenainte de a-\u0163i zice cum poti reformula, a\u015f vrea s\u0103 te \u00eentreb dac\u0103 \u015ftii <strong>ce este cacofonia<\/strong>. O s\u0103-l citez pe Pruteanu, cel care a luptat vehement pentru o conservare a limbii rom\u00e2ne corecte: \u201eCacofonie e un neologism format din dou\u0103 cuvinte grece\u015fti: kakos, care-nseamn\u0103 \u00abr\u0103u, ur\u00eet, prost\u00bb \u015fi phone, care-nseamn\u0103 sunet.\u00a0Cacofonie nu \u00eenseamn\u0103 doar al\u0103turarea \u00abca cartea\u00bb, \u00abca casa\u00bb, ci orice alt\u0103 al\u0103turare de sunete ce ne r\u0103nesc auzul\u201d. Tot Pruteanu zicea: \u201e\u00centr-o propozi\u0163ie cum ar fi, s\u0103 zicem: \u00abAdesea la \u015fedin\u0163\u0103 to\u0163i ta\u0163ii tac\u00bb, finalul sacadat \u015fi \u0163\u0103c\u0103nitor e o cacofonie perfect\u0103! La fel, \u00eentr-o propozi\u0163ie de genul: \u00abMama mea m-a mascat\u00bb, aceast\u0103 succesiune de \u00abma\u00bb-uri, care seam\u0103n\u0103 cu o b\u00eelb\u00eeial\u0103, este tot o cacofonie indiscutabil\u0103\u201d.<\/p>\n<p>Iar ast\u0103zi m\u0103 voi ocupa doar de al\u0103turarea \u201eca&#8230; ca\u201d.<\/p>\n<p>Revenind la Toastmasters, cele trei situa\u021bii \u00eent\u00e2lnite la Mihai, unul dintre cei care \u0219i-a prezentat discursul mar\u021bi, la Toastmasters, unde s-a folosit \u201eca \u0219i\u201d, au fost:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201em\u0103 va sprijini pe mine, ca \u0219i industrie\u201d<\/li>\n<li>\u201eca \u0219i metafor\u0103 a medicamentelor\u201d<\/li>\n<li>\u201es\u0103 evolu\u0103m ca \u0219i societate\u201d.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>A\u0219a cum spuneam \u0219i \u00een filmule\u021b,<strong> \u00een toate cele trei cazuri nu exist\u0103 nicio cacofonie<\/strong>, \u201eca \u015fi\u201d folosindu-se \u00een mod automat, f\u0103r\u0103 a ne mai g\u00e2ndi dac\u0103 e corect sau nu. <strong>A devenit un cli\u0219eu, \u00een cele din urm\u0103, un obicei de care e mai greu s\u0103 te desprinzi.<\/strong> Din p\u0103cate.<br \/>\nEu am identificat dou\u0103 situa\u021bii \u00een care se folose\u0219te aceast\u0103 formulare, \u0219i anume:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>fie vrei s\u0103 evi\u021bi o cacofonie \u0219i e cea mai la \u00eendem\u00e2n\u0103 solu\u021bie, pe care foarte mul\u021bi cei din jur o folosesc (deci te g\u00e2nde\u0219ti \u0219i tu c\u0103 e corect\u0103)<\/li>\n<li>fie \u00ee\u021bi vine automat, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 \u0219tii c\u0103, de fapt, e gre\u0219it ceea ce scrii sau spui.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>\u00cen ceea ce prive\u0219te evitarea cacofoniei, a\u0219 vrea s\u0103-\u021bi spun c\u0103 e o fals\u0103 rezolvare formularea \u201eCa \u0219i candidat, am dreptul s\u0103-mi exprim p\u0103rerea cu privire la acest subiect\u201d.<\/p>\n<p>Cum po\u021bi spune altcumva?<\/p>\n<p>Exist\u0103 mai multe variante.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Cea mai bun\u0103 solu\u021bie este s\u0103 \u00eenlocuie\u0219ti \u201eca \u015fi\u201d cu \u201e\u00een calitate de\u201d<\/strong>.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u00cen calitate de candidat, am dreptul s\u0103-mi exprim p\u0103rerea cu privire la acest subiect.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Uite \u0219i alte contexte foarte \u00eent\u00e2lnite:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong><\/strong><del>Ca \u0219i<\/del> mul\u021bumire, \u021bi-am adus flori. <strong>NU<\/strong>. <strong>Gre\u0219it<\/strong>! Ce s\u0103 caute aici \u201eca \u0219i\u201d?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Po\u021bi spune:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Drept mul\u021bumire, \u021bi-am adus flori.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Sau reformulezi, \u00eenlocuie\u0219ti cuvinte, pui sinonime, faci un artificiu \u0219i intercalezi un cuv\u00e2nt<\/strong> pentru ca efectul sup\u0103r\u0103tor \u201eca&#8230; ca\u201d s\u0103 nu se produc\u0103.<\/p>\n<p>Hai s\u0103-\u021bi dau un exemplu:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Ca \u0219i copil,<\/strong> am f\u0103cut multe n\u0103zb\u00e2tii.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Bun. \u00cen mod cert, avem de-a face aici cu o cacofonie, pe care, din obi\u015fnuin\u021b\u0103, crezi c\u0103 ai putea-o evita cu ajutorul lui \u201eca \u015fi\u201d.<\/p>\n<p>Uite alt mod \u00een care ai putea face acest lucru:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Fiind copil,<\/strong> am f\u0103cut multe n\u0103zb\u00e2tii.<\/li>\n<li><strong>C\u00e2nd eram copil,<\/strong> am f\u0103cut multe n\u0103zb\u00e2tii.<\/li>\n<li><strong>\u00cen copil\u0103ria mea<\/strong>, am f\u0103cut multe n\u0103zb\u00e2tii.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Totodat\u0103, am mai v\u0103zut<strong> situa\u021bii aberante \u00een care spui, efectiv, virgul\u0103, atunci c\u00e2nd vorbe\u0219ti.<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><del>Ca(virgul\u0103)copil<\/del>, am f\u0103cut multe n\u0103zb\u00e2tii. <strong>\u00cen niciun caz. Niciodat\u0103.<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Virgula<\/strong>, fiind un semn grafic,<strong> se folose\u0219te doar \u00een scris<\/strong>. At\u00e2t.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Exist\u0103 vreun caz \u00een care po\u021bi folosi cu \u00eencredere \u201eca \u015fi\u201d?<\/strong> Da. Am men\u021bionat acest lucru \u00een filmule\u021b \u00een urm\u0103torul context:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u0218i el, ca \u0219i mine, a fost \u00een Grecia. (\u0218i eu, \u0219i el am fost \u00een Grecia.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>S\u0103-\u021bi dau un alt exemplu:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Ca \u0219i regizor, nu a excelat. \u00cen schimb, ca actor, este foarte expresiv. (Persoana \u00een cauz\u0103 este at\u00e2t regizor, c\u00e2t \u0219i actor. E ca \u0219i cum ai spune: \u201eEl este regizor, dar mai este \u0219i actor\u201d).<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Care e secretul? Care e PRIMUL PAS pe care tu trebuie s\u0103-l faci?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><\/strong> <strong>S\u0103 devii con\u0219tient.<\/strong> Dac\u0103 ai de-a face \u0219i tu cu o cacofonie, nu folosi \u201eca \u015fi\u201d. \u00cenlocuie\u0219te, insereaz\u0103 un cuv\u00e2nt, reformuleaz\u0103. Folose\u0219te-\u021bi creativitatea. Caut\u0103 noi cuvinte, sensuri, sinonime.<\/p>\n<p>\u00cen leg\u0103tur\u0103 cu filmule\u021bul de la Toastmasters, am nevoie de un feedback de la tine. Mi-a\u0219 dori s\u0103-mi fac un obicei \u0219i s\u0103 postez \u00een fiecare s\u0103pt\u0103m\u00e2n\u0103 c\u00e2te un astfel de material pentru tine \u0219i vreau s\u0103-\u021bi \u0219tiu p\u0103rerea.<\/p>\n<p>\u00cen acela\u0219i timp, a\u0219 vrea s\u0103 \u0219tiu \u0219i ce alte exemple \u00een care tu folose\u0219ti \u201eca \u015fi\u201d sau ai auzit pe cineva spun\u00e2nd ori scriind a\u0219a.<\/p>\n<p>Cu drag,<\/p>\n<p>Vio<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u00ce\u021bi povesteam data trecut\u0103 de activitatea mea la Toastmasters\u00a0unde sunt Grammarian. \u00cenainte de a trece efectiv la gre\u0219eala pe care o \u00eent\u00e2lnesc foarte des, a\u0219 vrea s\u0103 \u00eemp\u0103rt\u0103\u0219esc cu tine un g\u00e2nd pe care nu mul\u021bi \u00eel \u0219tiu, \u0219i anume ce \u00eenseamn\u0103 pentru mine Toastmasters. 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