{"id":1166,"date":"2014-07-09T13:57:40","date_gmt":"2014-07-09T13:57:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=1166"},"modified":"2025-03-03T11:37:28","modified_gmt":"2025-03-03T09:37:28","slug":"la-ce-sa-fii-atent-cand-scrii-un-text","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/?p=1166","title":{"rendered":"La ce s\u0103 fii atent atunci c\u00e2nd scrii un text"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/images.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-1167\" src=\"https:\/\/scriebine.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/images.jpg\" alt=\"images\" width=\"253\" height=\"199\" \/><\/a><br \/>\nAzi f\u0103ceam un \u201einventar\u201d al c\u0103r\u0163ilor corectate \u015fi mi-au ie\u015fit 13 la num\u0103r. Din ce \u00eemi aduc eu aminte. \u00cen afar\u0103 de articole \u015fi de un blog \u00eentreg (de 180 de articole) pe care l-am terminat zilele acestea.<br \/>\n\u00cen timp, am observat c\u00e2teva lucruri care se repet\u0103 (\u00een afar\u0103 de gre\u015felile de gramatic\u0103) \u015fi care \u0163in mai mult de stil. Ei, provocarea mea este urm\u0103toarea (mai ales dac\u0103 este un autor nou, pe care nu \u00eel \u015ftiu personal): cum s\u0103 p\u0103strez autenticitatea autorului \u015fi, \u00een acela\u015fi timp, s\u0103 \u015fi cur\u0103\u0163 textul de buruieni lingvistice.<\/p>\n<p>Pentru c\u0103 deja sunt doi ani de c\u00e2nd fac acest lucru, mi-am creat un fel de sistem, o fi\u015f\u0103 a autorului \u015fi, la final, ca bonus, \u00eei dau \u015fi c\u00e2teva trucuri pe care le-am observat, lucruri pe care a\u015f vrea s\u0103 le \u00eembun\u0103t\u0103\u0163easc\u0103.<\/p>\n<p>\u00cen afar\u0103 de corectarea \u00een sine, pentru mine este important omul din spatele acelei c\u0103r\u0163i sau acelui articol.<\/p>\n<p>\u015ei m-am g\u00e2ndit s\u0103-\u0163i dau \u015fi \u0163ie ce am obsevat de-a lungul timpului. Poate \u00ee\u0163i este util. Nu este o list\u0103 complet\u0103, ci sunt lucruri care mi-au venit \u00een minte acum. Lista este deschis\u0103 \u015fi te rog s\u0103 o completezi dac\u0103 ai o idee nou\u0103.<\/p>\n<p>A\u015fadar\u2026 \u00eencepem:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Fraze mai scurte \u015fi clare.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>La \u00eenceput, s\u0103 nu-\u0163i scape inspira\u0163ia, scrii cum \u00ee\u0163i vine \u2013 apoi, faci o pauz\u0103 \u015fi recite\u015fti; observ\u0103, te rog, dac\u0103 ce ai scris are \u00een\u0163eles. Mesajul pe care vrei s\u0103-l transmi\u0163i este clar?<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Nu pune virgul\u0103 \u00eentre subiect \u015fi predicat!<\/li>\n<li>Nu scrie chiar cum vorbe\u015fti, f\u0103r\u0103 pauze \u015fi cu un limbaj \u00eenc\u00e2lcit, ci folose\u015fte cu \u00eencredere \u015fi semnele de punctua\u0163ie!<\/li>\n<li>Fii atent la acord!<\/li>\n<li>Fii atent la repeti\u0163ii \u2013 \u00een cazul \u00een care nu e\u015fti sigur dac\u0103 s\u0103 scrii un cuv\u00e2nt sau o formulare de mai multe ori, dup\u0103 ce ai scris, recite\u015fte \u015fi eviden\u0163iaz\u0103 cu o culoare ce se repet\u0103; atunci vezi clar frecven\u0163a acelor\u2026 repeti\u0163ii.<\/li>\n<li>Nu alterna persoanele \u2013 p\u0103streaz\u0103 o anumit\u0103 liniaritate a textului; cui te adresezi, de fapt?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>\u201e\u00cenainte s\u0103-\u0163i dezv\u0103lui ce vreau s\u0103-\u0163i spun \u00een continuare, vreau s\u0103-\u0163i imaginezi c\u0103 ai mai multe variante. Nu v\u0103 gr\u0103bi\u0163i, lua\u0163i-v\u0103 o pauz\u0103 \u015fi g\u00e2ndi\u0163i-v\u0103.\u201d<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Atunci c\u00e2nd te \u00eent\u00e2lne\u015fti cu o cacofonie, nu o \u201erezolva\u201d cu formularea \u201eca \u015fi\u201d.<\/li>\n<li>Respect\u0103 cuvintele, pentru c\u0103 \u015fi ele sunt o parte din tine. D\u0103-le o form\u0103 frumoas\u0103 \u015fi trateaz\u0103-le a\u015fa cum vrei tu, la r\u00e2ndul t\u0103u, s\u0103 fii tratat.<\/li>\n<li>Nu scrie cuvintele care sunt sinonime unul dup\u0103 altul. (Este un b\u0103iat \u00eendr\u0103zne\u0163 \u015fi cutez\u0103tor.)<\/li>\n<li>Atunci c\u00e2nd scrii o fraz\u0103 (mai ales dac\u0103 ai o parantez\u0103 intercalat\u0103), recite\u015fte-o. De multe ori se \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103 s\u0103 o \u00eencepi \u00eentr-un fel \u015fi pe la jum\u0103tatea ei s\u0103 te r\u0103zg\u00e2nde\u015fti \u015fi s\u0103 scrii despre altceva.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Astfel, pentru mine, e o fraz\u0103 incomplet\u0103 \u015fi cititorul nu \u00een\u0163elege ce ai vrut s\u0103 transmi\u0163i.<\/p>\n<p>Deci\u2026<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; claritatea mesajului<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; recitire, verificare (dup\u0103 o pauz\u0103)<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; semne de punctua\u0163ie<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; virgule<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; repeti\u0163ii<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; fraze mai scurte<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; p\u0103streaz\u0103 persoana c\u0103reia te adresezi<\/p>\n<p>Pentru tine cum este atunci c\u00e2nd scrii un text?<\/p>\n<p>\u015ei aminte\u015fte-\u0163i mereu c\u0103 oric\u00e2nd po\u0163i s\u0103 \u00eenve\u0163i ceva nou; spune-\u0163i \u201eBravo\u201d pentru fiecare cuv\u00e2nt \u00eenv\u0103\u0163at, pentru fiecare regul\u0103 sau pentru fiecare text reu\u015fit. Este meritul t\u0103u!<\/p>\n<p>O zi minunat\u0103!<\/p>\n<p>Cu drag,<\/p>\n<p>Vio<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Azi f\u0103ceam un \u201einventar\u201d al c\u0103r\u0163ilor corectate \u015fi mi-au ie\u015fit 13 la num\u0103r. 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